Power of the pyramid

• WALT write a different thing instead of copying what other people write.

My Audience

My Audience

We are learning to create a positive digital footprint.

We often share personal information when we are online. The people we share with could be our friends and family or people we don't know. We need to make smart decisions about what personal information we share online.

The cloud made of more

I came from the crystal and silky blue water and I heard birds chirping .

I could smell really hot air I was shivering .

I can hear the hot fire heating up ,

Dog barking woof, woof and sirens Nino, Nino, Nino, Nino.

The road was overloaded with cars and people, that I didn’t know. I went through the power lines and street lights and people looked at me because I was a disco light.

My face went down because I was really sad

I had no friends to play with. I went past the fire and I exploded with water and I put out the fire.

  

Rerlection

We are learning to create a positive digital footprint.

We often share personal information when we are online. The people we share with could be our friends and family or people we don't know. We need to make smart decisions about what personal information we share online.

Rerlection

beyond the line

World War 3

One Friday in 1989, it was war day and the gunfire reminded me of the time my brother and I were shooting cans on our back fence, how I wished I was back with him. I got on a boat. The boat ride was cool but when I got off I was shaking with fear. I could see men with guns and hear gunshots and shouting. I felt proud, nervous, and sad because I thought I wasn't going to see my family again. My tummy was turning from the boat ride.

It was so smokey and scary. I saw smoke, dust, paper, glass, T.V, hats, people screaming, people dying. I was so frightened, nervous and worried that I was there.

I smelt smoke and like food burning. It was so stinky, I couldn't unblock my nose.

I feet big and strong and proud that I was brave enough to be there.

I heard gunshots and people screaming, T.V glitching. I tasted dirt and smoke. Soldiers that smelt like rotten eggs.

THE END 

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Beyond the LInes