Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.
In Ako Ngatahi we had to write a narrative about a video. It was about a boy opening a present that was a dog with three legs. Here is the video of the present. I hope you enjoy my story.
The Present
It was a nice sunny day but I was sitting in the dark and playing x box . My mum came home and really annoyed me by opening all the curtains and plonking a box on the table so I couldn’t see the T.V. I was feeling really angry but I looked in the box anyway. It was a puppy. I picked it up and laughed. I thought it was cute but it wasn’t. Because then I saw that it only had 3 legs! I threw it on the floor in disgust.
The dog found a ball. The dog sat by my feet and stared at me with his big brown eyes. He wanted me to throw it, so I did . But then he brought it back! I kicked it in the box and it was so funny. He was stuck but the puppy got out . He banged into walls and kept falling over but he kept on trying. I thought this dog is actually pretty cool. I thought that I will play with him and I started playing with my puppy with the ball. I thought in my mind it was cool but not that much. I felt sad about it and went to play with the puppy and he was really happy and I was too. And he loved playing with the ball. I am happy that I have a friend like this dog because it only has 3 legs and I have a disabled leg too.
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