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Friday, November 19, 2021

For the last week in our fariytales we have been writing a story and here is mine. 

Once upon a time there was a little girl named Cinderella. She had beautiful blonde hair and blue eyes. Her mother passed away when she was six years old. She has been living with her loving step sisters and her step mother. Bella, one of her step sisters got really jealous so the step mother Patrice saw that Bella was getting jealous. Both step sisters Bella and Chloe went to tell their mother Patrice to make Cinderarella their personal made. Cinderella didn't want to do anything for anyone so she got locked in her kitchen until she did work for the mother and sisters. 


Two days passed really fast and she thought if she did something for her sisters and mother she could go to the prom that the king was planning. So she made people beds, cleaned their clothes and more. One day till the prom was here. Cinderella was so explicitly happy that she made herself a beautiful dress. The day went really fast. It was almost time for the prom to start. Cinderella put her beautiful dress on and jumped on the horse with her step mom. Her sisters we're not allowed to go. Patrice and Cinderella got there in time. The King and the prince were sitting outside to find someone they could dance with. The step mom went into the prom with the king and Cinderella walked in on the prince. Three hour went by and they both needed to go home. Patrice lost her clip on the way home. 


The king went looking and could not find her so then made another prom. Cinderella and Patrice went to the prom three days later and the king was putting the clip on everyone until Patrice walked in. She was wearing the same dress. The king spotted her and they danced all night. Midnight hit and the king and prince went down on one knee and the prince asked Cinderella to spend the rest of her life with him. The king asked Patrice if she would like to spend the rest of his life with him. Bella and Chloe were made to help clean because they would not be allowed in the kingdom if they didn't help clean. They all lived in peace. 


2 comments:

  1. I like your story,you did it perfectly.

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