Spencer Park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

 The best day at Spencer Park

On Friday 10th of March my class and I went to Spencer park for a fun day and learning day . We use 2 buses and 5 cars to get everyone there.i was happy  because  I got  away from school . We got in 4 groups I was in group 2.B. There were 8 teachers and parents

The first activity I went to was the beach. We went for a walk to get there and it was very long. We went to go play and went to have some food too. I had subway, a bar and same water. I thought the beach was cool because I dug in the sand down to the  water. We went to go to the playground

We got to the playground and I played on the flying fox and in the bushes.

I felt happy. It was cool and so fun. At the playground I also played on the jungle gym and spider web, it was so cool. I went to play in the sand and the playground.

We went to have luch and I had some tedber  bisckis . I sat with mikalya,  hannah and a tree . we went to play on the playground .  After we ate.we wewnt to go to the long walk to a bird hideout. We didn’t make it to the end because we didn’t know where to go.

We stopped in the midde so we could eat and drink. We looked at the lovely view we saw the swamp and we saw some horses. I was so happy and exsosed. I faned a stick and I walk with it.   We walk Out of the long walk. We went playgroud and we went to play and then we got same fruit and I got a apple and it was yammey.

We went ner the bus. We went on the bus and I sat nere Joseph and Tashern. I borght back a stik and i lost it. We got out of the bus and we went to my cluss.

Math

WALT 

We Are Learning To add two digit numbers by first adding the once and then ten

WALT

We Are Learning To subtract two digit numbers by first adding the once and then ten

the sun

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there are face about the sun

we are learning about the sun

the sun is really hot
the sun is 5 billion years old
the sun 15.000.000 C. .
my challenge is to make the words darker 

Math

This is my 

make 10 video

I had to add 3 or more numbers.

WALT add 3 or more numbers by first making pairs that add up to 10.

WALT mean we are learning to.

I feel good about the math strategy.

my step it is to use bigger numbers

Math

WALT 

Add numbers by splitting them into parts

The Present

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

In Ako Ngatahi we had to write a narrative about a video. It was about a boy opening a present that was a dog with three legs. Here is the video of the present. I hope you enjoy my story.

The Present

It was a nice sunny day but I was sitting in the dark and playing x box . My mum came home and really annoyed me by opening all the curtains and plonking a box on the table so I couldn’t see the T.V. I was feeling really angry but I looked in the box anyway. It was a puppy. I picked it up and laughed. I thought it was cute but it wasn’t. Because then I saw that it only had 3 legs! I threw it on the floor in disgust.

The dog found a ball. The dog sat by my feet and stared at me with his big brown eyes. He wanted me to throw it, so I did . But  then he brought it back! I kicked it in the box and it was so funny. He was stuck but the puppy got out . He  banged into walls and kept falling over but he kept on trying.  I thought this dog is actually pretty cool. I thought that I will play with him and I started playing with my puppy  with the ball. I thought in my mind it was cool but not that much. I felt sad about it and went to play with the puppy and he was really happy and I was too. And he loved playing with the ball. I am happy that I have a friend like this dog because it only has 3 legs and I have a disabled leg too.

THE END

Mattisin Learning Goals 2017

Cybersmart DLO

On Thursday we went to go to Hornby High and we went to go see this guy his name is John Parson. He told us about cyber safety, he is a professional. I felt confident after he talked to us .