I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, April 29, 2020
ending of a store
¨We all should go for a swim next week that will be fun but at the pools¨said Ebby. ¨Yes that will be a great idea¨ everyone said. They ended the day with some game.
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Mattisin,
ReplyDeleteIs this your reading activity work? It is completely unacceptable. I expect you will go back and redo this properly. I assume it is the alternative ending to your story? Which story did yur read? Where is your reflection?